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I'm Sorry

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I'm sorry to begin like this,
but this issue, I can't dismiss.
My mind is telling me to quit
believing what my heart tells it;
It tells me that our love is what we both outgrew...
So if you're sorry, please know that I'm sorry, too.

I'm sorry no one taught you to
put those you love ahead of you.
I'm always looking out for us,
but your feelings, you won't discuss...
And this is how the story always seems to go.
So if you're asking me to stay, I'm sorry, No.

I'm sorry for the disbelief,
but our story has not been brief;
And after all, you can't defend
a situation that must end.
So I don't think that I can do it anymore...
And so there is the last thing that I'm sorry for.

 

 Â© 1/07/2012 Koda Gallegos, All Rights Reserved

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  • Posted by (user) DOCTORATE SIR DANIELLIAN PHIL SR on Writing.com - 1/07/2012

"EXPRESSING SORRY!
PLEADING SORRY!!

I liked this short Wrapped Refrain poem for its naturally flown thoughts well over.

I enjoyed the rhymes in couplets, the melody and clarity of thoughts as conveyed and the word imageries which were all full of intense feeling and refraining, and the word visuals which were aptly able to grow intensity of the feeling in stamped visualizations.

It was a pleasant apology pleading read.

ALLORDE DANIELLIAN LITTERATEUR"

1/07/2012 on Writing.com

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